Wednesday, August 15, 2012

Hiaku Serendipity. Microwave.

Hiakus are easy
But sometimes they don't make sense
Refrigerator

9 comments:

  1. What the?
    Why?
    Who cares?
    Where is it anyway?
    Washing machine.

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    1. All poets care about hiakus. The fact that you don't just shows how far down the culture chain you have allowed your solitary life to slip. Try to hide this ignorance from RDG if you know what's good for you. A friendly warning.

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  2. She'll spot you for an impostor and a low-ku,immediately, if you don't spell Haiku correctly.

    Waves crash and fall
    Words break
    On Max's blog

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    1. Good one. And here I was copying it off a T-shirt, too. The ultimate authority from China. Now that's funny. :)

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    2. Said I
      "Hai, Ku,
      Is that you?"

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    3. Hai. 'Tis Ku.

      I congratulate you, oh master, for your bold disregard of the ancient 5-7-5 tradition. Your new invention of free-form Haiku is indeed revolutionary and to be revered.

      Now all that remains is for you to work on your enlightened meta 4.

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  3. 5-7-5 may be tradition, but it's far from definitive.

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    1. No poetry is definitive. Certainly not mine.
      You are much closer to the expert on such things than I am.
      Hoover.

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    2. Some haiku masters
      strike fear in little doggies
      wrapped in red blankies ...

      xxx

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